This story was written in response to my picture/prompt and I love it! The writing is good, I genuinely like both characters, and there was some nice introspection on the part of Drew, who is trying to come to terms with his sexuality. I also loved the little twist at the end When Leigh reveals he's long had a crush on Drew
. I also liked the urban legends theme quite a lot.
My only quibble is that the story ends just as it gets rolling and we don't get any time with the boys post their first tentative kiss. I can only assume Kate is planning to continue this in some form outside of this event.
Thank you for your story, Kate. I'm very pleased with your take on this prompt.